My cam sucks for night shots also thats why i did not do a video.
Yours reminded me of something my son would do, he likes all that zoom in zoom out stuff also and the lights streaking .
But jd is right it is hard to see what you had on display at times. maybe next time do a day video and it doesnt have to have people going thru your haunt .
Im guessing the videos they want here are to show your displays to give people more ideas on there own haunts, and what you put into them. I could be wrong though.
From what i seen you did have a lot of props ...tombstones ,guys etc. on the outside which were good,good job on those. Couldnt see much for the inside ,but alot of hard work went into your haunt i'm sure.
Im not an expert on videos, but maybe take your time next time since you are editing them, or if you could designate someone to do that if you are too busy with the haunt and im guessing since you had 5000 people it must be worth it.